Animal Jam

So I did an essay about Animal Jam... and I named it Animal Jam.  So I just wanted to how you like it. Please do not give me corrections. That's my writing teacher's job. You can just do a comment if you like it or not. Here it is:


When you go to animal jam for the first time, Liza the panda shaman will tell you about AJ, how to customize your animal, etc. Liza isn't the only shaman, there are a variety such as: Greeley the wolf shaman, Peck the bunny shaman, Sir Gilbert the tiger shaman, Graham the monkey shaman, and more.

Although, AJ is a safe enviroment there are people there who can hack and scam you. I suggest to make a password that's hard to guesss but easy to remember. Some Jammers say cuss words, too. You should just report them.

If you want to become a member of AJ, unfortunatly it costs money. Not money in AJ, real money. One month membership is $5.95, six months membership is $29.95, twelve months membership is $49.95. When your a member, you get more choices than non-members. I think that non-members are being left out and members get all the galore. Members can have more than one animal avatar, get to have monthly member gifts, more dens, and such.

Non-members doesn't have much choices but that doesn't mean they can't have fun. They can still get awesome items especially on Rare Monday. They can also go underwater using their seal avatar to explore! There are a lot of good differences between membersand non-members.

~GreenLeafs